Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Overrated

Love is overrated
You said -
Memory strands entangled with old sights
As fleeting as Aurora Borealis
A heartbeat that skips in an iota of a second
The chill of
a certain spring
a heron on the wind
Steeples in the mist
Full moons later
Your eye threaded to this mind-weaving
motif? Was that your word..
And, love
Is ?

5 comments:

lady oracle said...
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lady oracle said...
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lady oracle said...

WOW! What can I say...except what I have always known...it is not ME that's the poet in this family. Love you akki.

Mahisshi said...

Very powerful! Love is not overrated!! Marriage is!!! :) I love this poem.

yich said...

Thank you both of you...what can I say? C'est bon.